I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the Kia Manawanui syndicate and my teachers are Mr Janse and Ms Schellingerhout.
This is my work about Chile and i have been Learning about a flag about chile and i Learnt that there are More people in Chile is a better places to Live in.
Kia Ora! Hi I'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhrst Model School. I really liked your blog post because it looked like you worked really hard on it . Maybe next time you could maybe put it on a sid and maybe like add cool designs ands and explain more about it. And you could maybe say what's on it because I can't really see it that clear so maybe you could say what's on it. Maybe you could put some facts about it to make it more interesting. What's is some facts about Chile? What's your favorite one? Plus maybe next time you could proofread it , and add some capitals.
Kia Ora!
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Grace a year 7 student from Yaldhrst Model School.
I really liked your blog post because it looked like you worked really hard on it .
Maybe next time you could maybe put it on a sid and maybe like add cool designs ands and explain more about it.
And you could maybe say what's on it because I can't really see it that clear so maybe you could say what's on it.
Maybe you could put some facts about it to make it more interesting.
What's is some facts about Chile?
What's your favorite one?
Plus maybe next time you could proofread it , and add some capitals.
But apart from that I liked it
- Kind regards Grace